The Sun Is So Yellow
People Keep Telling Me Hello
As It Shine In my Face
He Say Hey My Name Is Ace
Do You Want To Go On A Date
Like Superman With My Fate
Have A Good Time And Eat Some Cake
Why We Stare Into The Lake
Just Dont Be Late
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This poem should contain rhyming couplets, which means you must have an even number of lines. You have 9. Also, you were asked for 2 lines with similes, but I only see 1.
You only have 4 out of the 5 poems required. What's up with that?
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