Thursday, March 27, 2008

Can You Hear?(1)

Do You Hear The Screech
On The Door
Drip,Drip
Drop,Drop
As The Rain Hits The Window
The Owner Of The House Eyes Sparkle Like A Star
Her Voice
Is As Loud As An Horn Beeping, Beeping
Down The Road
Trucks,Cars, Birds,And Boats Engines
Going Off
louder And Louder They Roar
Sounds Like A Lion
Its So Much Going On In This Little Country
Town, Village
Excitment All The Time

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

Good use of some of the different types of figurative language. Now write a poem from your heart and soul, and then go back and add some figurative language.