Do You Really Want Me
OR
Just My Body
Do You Mean It When You Say I Love You
Want To Hold You Tight As My New Braids Gripping Me As Fast As The Rain Dripping Off My Coat Drip, Drop,Drip
You Say You Want Me But Do You Really
I ask you do you really
Because You Dont Act Like You Really Do Do You Really Want Me For Me Words Are Just Words Actions Are As Exciting As Makeing A Touch Down On A Foot Ball Fiel So I Just Want You To Understand When I Ask You Do You Really?
OR
Just My Body
Do You Mean It When You Say I Love You
Want To Hold You Tight As My New Braids Gripping Me As Fast As The Rain Dripping Off My Coat Drip, Drop,Drip
You Say You Want Me But Do You Really
I ask you do you really
Because You Dont Act Like You Really Do Do You Really Want Me For Me Words Are Just Words Actions Are As Exciting As Makeing A Touch Down On A Foot Ball Fiel So I Just Want You To Understand When I Ask You Do You Really?
2 comments:
Powerful poem and good use of figurative language (simile and onomatopoeia). Which poem is this of the five assigned? Please number it.
In Poem 5, you are supposed to tell me what poetic devices you have used and in which lines.
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